Awesome – I love that feedback, thank you Laurel! I’ll look over some other things we have written and see if I can come up with something that’s more tangible. I agree – someone would have to be “in the know” to get our reference to lemonade stands (we helped pass a law in Utah a few years ago that makes it legal for kids to run businesses, like lemonade stands, lawn mowing, etc.)
I appreciate the constructive advice! Talk soon 🙂